For the first time of his extremely short existence of eleven years, Babui didn’t think of fear. The gas-lights of the streets adjacent to the jomidar-bari seemed to glow with an angry fervour to him. He tiptoed across the empty street and stood beside the horse-cart, recontemplating his decision. Should he or shouldn’t he?
Flute music was wafting in the air, caressing him with gentle touches, when he entered through the gate. The darkness had by now descended upon him like a thick blanket trying to suffocate him. With hurried steps he came upon the door.
“Nayeb moshai? O nayeb moshai!”.
Stunned silence.
“Who is it?”.
“I…I am Harilal’s son, sir”, stuttered Babui softly.
“Harilal the farmer?”.
“Yes, sir”.
“What do you want?”, asked the treasurer sternly.
“I want to meet Krishnarai babu – its very important”.
“At this hour of the night? Are you mad? Go home. Come tomorrow…”.
“Please, sir. Please. Its urgent.”, pleaded Babui, at the verge of tears.
“Ei re. Don’t you cry now. Wait, let me see what can be done. You sit here.”
Babui sat down on the chequered marbled floor quietly and waited. The corridor before him was too huge for him to even look at. There were framed pictures and works of art everywhere. A huge chandelier loomed viciously over his head. He could hear voices coming from somewhere. The atmosphere was too overpowering for the small world of Babui. He wondered whether he could have worn that other shirt he had.
the first part has me wanting to know much more about where the story will be heading,so yes am waiting...
As I mentioned back then, this seemed right out of British era Bengal.
I really liked the way you captured the time-frame with just a few mannerisms and words.
So when is Part II coming out? Or do you need more non-verbal permanent ear-boxing spells? :P
@ Shreya : Thanks! Prince will be posting the second part soon.
@ Lucid Darkness : I feel honoured that you liked it! And please, I love my ears, though I can't hear that well. The second part would be by Prince. (Aside : And he doesn't like his ears that much! Hehe...)
waiting for d part 2 eagerly :)
nicely captured that era....good one..truly:)
when am i going to read the next part?(am more interested in 3rd part,i daresay!) :)
@ Nabanita : Thanks for the enthusiasm and encouragement!
@ Oh Gosh! : The second part is going to be much better. Trust me on this!
Ahem. I know why Lucifer wrote this. Gah.. I hate you!
Meh... nevertheless, your writing is amazing.
Let's see how you people react to my stupidity... h'm.
Sharky: No, I don't like my ears too much, as Lucifer rightly quoted.
Very well written... and yes, the way you captured the time-frame is really nice.
@ Prince : I labh you! Hehe. [:P]
@ Steelbunz : I feel honoured! [bows]
@ Akaash : We do this for fun. So, don't go on thinking. And yes, the size will increase and decrease with the pattern of story themes. So don't worry.